Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

individuals think that
music
is a precious instrument to unite people from distinct cultures and ages. I am partial agree with
this
idea. In my opinion, every culture has a unique way to express their tradition and melody is one the powerful utensil to
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ransmitter. It is like common languages for different cultures because
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uman voice has the same frequency and musical instruments have similar notes and every person from the babies to
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lderly can understand these voices. If a person feels the rhythm of audio
then
he or she can empathize with other people.
for example
,I use some phone application to listen to
music
I follow some group from all over the world. sometimes I am staring for other followers and I am seeing that there are individuals from different nationalities and distinct ages.
on the other hand
,
music
is done by lyrics and I couldn'
t
grasp the other languages that are why I didn'
t
understand the singer and what talking about,
this
situation is hearth breaking for different people because they don'
t
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these kinds of foreign audios because they don'
t
understand.
For instance
, My father like the classical Turkish
music
and he usually want to hear
music
via radio but when I turn radio channel for
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ifferent language program, he gets angry and says of couldn'
t
understand. In a conclusion, I believe the uniting power of
music
with all of my hearths but some drawbacks of different
music
can'
t
blind my eye, because some limitation may hamper to understand
music
very well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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