The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The maps illustrate changes in how to access
to
a city hospital in the Change preposition
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year
2007 and 2010.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, there was a significant improvement in road
infrastructure in front of the hospital. Besides
, more parking space was available after three
years of reconstruction.
Looking into details, there was the appearance of two roundabouts at the two intersections of Hospital Road
after being constructed. The three
bus stops situated on the left of Hospital Road
in
2007 were demolished to make way for a spacious bus station connecting to the roundabouts. The other Change preposition
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three
bus stops to the right of the road
were also
removed completely. Before the construction, the car park at the corner of City Road
and Hospital Road
was used for both the staff and the public. However
, three
years later, it was separated and only used for the employees, leading to the erection of another parking area for the public located to the east of the hospital.Submitted by Denis on
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