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Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

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Education is of great importance to children as well as leisure activities. The goal of some people is to merge education and entertainment into one activity while some believe that failure to do
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educational value because it has been scientifically proven to be of great relevance and
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ignificant level of intelligence. Leisure activities
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 a perfect time to
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 knowledge in a child’s mind, and some people are adamant about
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. A good chunk of study discovers that teaching is meant to be fun, which in turn stimulates the children’s interest. Take Ghana,
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most children’s toys sold in the country have some educational value.
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, incorporating education element into toys is scientifically proven that kids playing toys should be a learning tool.
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, most people are of the school of thought that children leisure time must be in academic activities or else it is they are
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omplete waste of time.
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, pupils who
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 faster and tend to be more intelligent than others who do not. Most foundation schools in Nigeria encourages parents to get their wards tablets with downloaded apps which will help the kids learn while having fun as well. Children learn through play and help build intelligence. In conclusion, some people believe that wards leisure activities must be educational,
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it would not add value.
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 of great benefits, as it has scientific relevance and
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 a great level of intelligence to children.
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