People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic. You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, many people often argue the best way to decrease the number of

crime

. Some

believe

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in longer sentences, while others insist

of

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different methods

such

as capital

punishment

.

This

essay will examine reasons

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both arguments and my opinion regarding

this

topic.

First

, for those who believe in longer sentences assume that it will provide sufficient time for criminals to reconsider about consequences of their actions and make them regret what they did since they will

also

lose their freedom.

Therefore

, those criminals will not commit the

crime

again and.

As a result

, the

crime

rate

will go down.

In addition

, it is beneficial for our societies since those criminals are in prisons.

Therefore

, there will be

less

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people who will commit

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rime.

As a result

,

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urther reduction can be achieved.

On the other hand

, believers of alternative methods disagree with giving longer sentences because they know that it does not really reduce the

crime

rate

. It is simply ineffective.

Instead

, they would like to propose other methods. One of them is

the

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capital

punishment

. Though it is still controversial and prohibited in many countries, they believe in justice and morality which defines that each individual is responsible for their actions.

Therefore

, if a

person

killed somebody, the

person

also

has to be killed. In fact,

this

belief is

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in Japan and Japan is one of

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ountries which supports death sentence and the

rate

of

crime

is the lowest in the world.

Similarly

,

middle

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Eastern countries

such

as Iran has been implementing very famous approach which is called, "

eye

for

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ye, arm for

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the

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rm". What it means is almost same as

the

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capital

punishment

. If a

person

damages other's

eye

, the

person

's

eye

should be damaged too.

Therefore

, criminals receive exactly

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ame consequences as the victims received.

As a result

, criminals will not commit the

crime

again and non-criminals

also

do not want to experience

this

.

Therefore

, the

rate

will be reduced.

Lastly

, in my opinion, I strongly support

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atter approach since I am

also

a believer for social justice which provides the opportunity for victims for their revenge. Obviously,

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urrent model which gives longer sentence does not work.

Instead

, our society needs to impose harder sentences. Japan and Iran have shown

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proof of

crime

reduction.

In other words

, it is not about quantity, but quality.

This

is the best approach. In conclusion, to recapitulate, there

are

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controversy regarding methods of decreasing crimes.

However

, based on some

evidences

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evidence

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, the best way is to provide capital

punishment

or impose

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ame actions to criminals as victims experienced.