People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic. You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, many people often argue the best way to decrease the number of

crime

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. Some

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in longer sentences, while others insist

of

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different methods

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as capital

punishment

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essay will examine reasons

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both arguments and my opinion regarding

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topic.

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, for those who believe in longer sentences assume that it will provide sufficient time for criminals to reconsider about consequences of their actions and make them regret what they did since they will

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lose their freedom.

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, those criminals will not commit the

crime

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again and.

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, the

crime

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rate

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will go down.

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, it is beneficial for our societies since those criminals are in prisons.

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, there will be

less

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people who will commit

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rime.

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,

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urther reduction can be achieved.

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, believers of alternative methods disagree with giving longer sentences because they know that it does not really reduce the

crime

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rate

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. It is simply ineffective.

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, they would like to propose other methods. One of them is

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capital

punishment

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. Though it is still controversial and prohibited in many countries, they believe in justice and morality which defines that each individual is responsible for their actions.

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, if a

person

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killed somebody, the

person

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also

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has to be killed. In fact,

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belief is

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in Japan and Japan is one of

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ountries which supports death sentence and the

rate

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of

crime

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is the lowest in the world.

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,

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Eastern countries

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as Iran has been implementing very famous approach which is called, "

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ye, arm for

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rm". What it means is almost same as

the

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capital

punishment

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. If a

person

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damages other's

eye

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, the

person

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's

eye

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should be damaged too.

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, criminals receive exactly

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ame consequences as the victims received.

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, criminals will not commit the

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again and non-criminals

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do not want to experience

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.

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, the

rate

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will be reduced.

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, in my opinion, I strongly support

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atter approach since I am

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a believer for social justice which provides the opportunity for victims for their revenge. Obviously,

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urrent model which gives longer sentence does not work.

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, our society needs to impose harder sentences. Japan and Iran have shown

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proof of

crime

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reduction.

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, it is not about quantity, but quality.

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is the best approach. In conclusion, to recapitulate, there

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controversy regarding methods of decreasing crimes.

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, based on some

evidences

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evidence

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, the best way is to provide capital

punishment

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or impose

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ame actions to criminals as victims experienced.