Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are important for education and conservation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In recent times, animals have been confined to an enormous extent for varied reasons.
Although
it is stated zoos are necessary for education and conservation of animals, it is argued by others that it is inhumane to keep animals in
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aptivity of animals is cruel. People who advocate the zoo, claim that it is a significant tool to improvise the environmental issues, raising awareness and
also
to fight for the protection of the endangered species.
Although
captive animals are not free to roam around, it helps them to survive rather going extinct because of zoos conservational programs. In Australia,
for instance
, the Tasmanian Devil is kept in
captivity
so that they could be safe from the contagious disease they were once suffering with.
This
helps people to be educated and informed about living a sustainable
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so as to ensure the safety of animals and
moreover
, it helps in safeguarding animals from going extinct. Despite
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the positive effect zoos have, others, myself included, feel that
captivity
of animals is inhumane. Even though
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aptivity of animals would encourage their conservation;
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, animals
such
as lions and elephants struggle to reproduce and live a healthy life. In relation to educating people, there
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no written record that people are living a sustainable life so as to protect the creatures of the wild.
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, most of the time, captive animals are not led back into
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ild. In short,
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aptivity of animals is cruel and an inhumane practice to protect and treat them. In conclusion, even though some people would argue that sheltering animals in zoos
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for their protection; I,
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an improper way to treat them. Their lives are not confined to be in the cage, but to be in the wild.
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