convinience foods will become increasingly prevelant and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparing. to what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Over the period, it has been a dramatic change in terms of the
food
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people consume. Convenient
food
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is becoming more popular throughout the world, especially in developed countries. Some people, because of the strong influence of
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trend on people's
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habits, argue that
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food
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will replace traditional cuisine.
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, I completely disagree with
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statement. There are two main reasons why traditional cooking is likely to retain its popularity in the nearest future.
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of all, the variety of different diseases and viruses have rendered cooking necessary. It is true that, due to the fast pace of life, people prefer to purchase
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, so they are able to save time.
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it is is more convenient to lead
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kind of life, the Covid-19 pandemic that an outbreak of new coronavirus disease 2019 makes it clear that preparing
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on their own can contribute transmission of viruses. Because, according to research, heat treatment kills most viruses, including coronavirus.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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