You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting a solution.

Dear Sir My name is Shivani
Silhi
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Delhi
and I have passed my interview recently with success for the job post of Senior Business Manager in your organization. I am writing
this
letter to express my concern with the joining date i.e 15th
Novemeber
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November
on which
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was expected to commence my work. As mentioned during
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the
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nterview
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interview
process, that I do have
contract
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with the current company which will end on 30th November. I was advised by your manager to discuss
regarding
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this
with them once which I did, but unfortunately, none of the companies will allow
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the contract ever as
this
would be against their policies so I am unable to leave it before time. I apologize for the inconvenience caused to you.
However
, I strongly believe that you will surely understand my concern and
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, it will give you more clarity of my ethics that I will never be breaking any rules in your team too. I would really appreciate
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you could extend the joining date by 2 weeks. I shall be ready for the immediate start afterwards. Once again, apologies for the delay. I look forward to your affirmative response.
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faithfully, Shivani
Silhi
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Delhi
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