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You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe why you are having the party Give directions on how to get to the venue Suggest how you can accommodate him/her

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Dear Catherine, How are you? It's been quite a long while since we've met and the
last
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 time we met up was during your birthday.
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 a memorable moment it was and every
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 of being with you was truly delightful. I missed your company so much all these days. Guess what? My son Adrian is going to celebrate his
first
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 birthday and we have planned to hold a small party. We really need you to join the event with us and make it special. You have immensely helped us in uniting my husband, John, and
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 and eventually aiding me in getting married to my longtime love. We are always extremely indebted to you. Your presence on the occasion is of dire importance. We are keeping the party at our house where we have moved very recently. You can come here by
bus
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 that leaves your town in the morning and the
bus
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 stop name is Picardy. Once you reach the
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 stop, come to the nearby park, which is in close proximity to the aforementioned
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 stop, and call me. I can send my hubby over to pick you up from there. As our new home is quite spacious, we have a separate room reserved for guests and you should be able to acclimatize well there.
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, the room has an attached washroom, and
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, you should not feel any compromise in your personal comfort. My hubby is a great cook and he makes truly delightful dishes to let your taste buds experience a real pleasure. More than all, I have a lot to talk
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 you, and so come over soon. No excuses allowed and we will really await your presence to make our son's birthday, a special and unforgettable one. Feel free to call me anytime. Meet you soon. Love, Mary
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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