You have had a problem with your next-door neighbor. You have not been able to speak to your neighbor about this. Write a letter to this neighbor. In your letter: • Explain the problem • Suggest a solution • Say what action you will take if the situation does not improve Begin as follows: Dear ... ,

Dear Mr Green, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction

about

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your ways of dealing with rubbish because they have adversely impacted our

neighbuorhood

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neighbourhood

environment for a while. I have noticed that you have

not

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clean your trash bins since

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month, and all of them have been overflowed. I could smell

apungent

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a pungent

pungent

stench every time I come across those bins. Since the weather is getting hotter these days, I am worrying that the piled trash could generate horrible bacteria or even

virus

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. By that time, the sanitation and health levels of the whole community will be under serious

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. I hope

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issue could arouse your attention, and rapid actions could be taken to tackle the problem. I ask you to remove all of the trash immediately and clean the surroundings before

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Sunday. I do not think it is hard to achieve because the dust carts come to our block every evening. If you do not do that on time, I would call the community centre to take

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actions

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. I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest, Yours faithfully,

Mr.

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Sam Smith

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Oct 9, 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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