Some people believe that children should go to extra classes after school. Others, however, think that children should spend that time playing instead. Discuses both views and give your own opinion.

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extra classes to build their careers.

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it is stated that many individuals believe their children should be enrolled in extra classes after

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hours, it is often argued by many that youngsters should spend their

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playing and having some physical activities.

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essay will demonstrate both the views, though I personally believe that children should spend their

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playing after

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hours because that will help them to stimulate their brains and

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have a career apart from the regular ones. People who advocate about extra classes after

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believe that it has certain advantages to it. To being with, youngsters in their added classes are taught much carefully understanding their strengths and weaknesses. A coaching class,

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, is able to focus on their students much better as compared to a

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, because they cater to a limited number of students.

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would help the tutors to identify in which aspects are the students strong and where are they lacking.

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higher education. Even though higher educations in different parts of the worlds are getting difficult to enrol in, many children are being able to accomplish their dreams with the help of extra coaching. Clearly, additional classes after

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the students in their long-term career. Others, myself included, argue that juveniles should be encouraged often to be involved in playing games and other physical activities. The main reason being, it helps the student to stimulate their brain cells.

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, it is often noticed that a

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been involved in outdoor games rather than being at home and studying

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not only performing well in sports but

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in other aspects of their educational career.

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the

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has a firm education background being at

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, physical activity ensures that it supports the

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to think and find a profession which is way apart from those who select to

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ordinary job life. To illustrate, the former Indian cricketer, MS. Dhoni was a graduate from Delhi

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who was not only good in his sport but

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in his academic life. In short, playing

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should not be compromised with added education. In conclusion, even though some

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that they should

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their children in additional classes after

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hours, I personally believe that their playing

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after

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hours should not be compensated. As

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could cause them to live a sedentary lifestyle as well as would opt them out from choosing

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right

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pathway for themselves.