Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Every

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has its own museums or galleries, though the people have to pay for visiting some of these, some allow

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ree visit. These fees have some advantageous side

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as it enriches the economy of the

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and

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help to maintain the

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, while the disadvantages are that people do not visit these areas often and the artefacts can be destroyed without

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maintenance

expense.

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, the entry fees of these museums and galleries aid to increase the revenue of the

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.

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, people pay an

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to

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enter

into these places which are added to the national income which helps the economy.

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, these tickets money can be used to maintain the artworks or sculptures to preserve these from getting

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destroyed

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, nearly 40% of the

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cost of the National Museum of Bangladesh comes from the entrance fee paid by

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visitors.

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, one demerit for paying admission to these places can be that poorer people of the

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might not be able to pay the price

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a negative aspect for the nation as a large

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of the population are deprived

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knowing about their

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.

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, if a certain

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of fee is not availed by the general people, it will become difficult for the government to pay for the

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maintenance

cost

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, the artefacts will ruin eventually. In my opinion, there should be a minimum

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of price fixed for all to enter into these venues by the government, so that neither the galleries are affected nor the people are deprived of visiting these locations. To conclude, despite

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some drawbacks, the advantages of paying to get admission to these meaningful areas outweigh and there should be a minimum payment fixed for everyone.