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In many countries, people have health problems because they choose to live in unhealthy ways. What do you think the reasons for this and how can be solved?

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Nowadays, people's mundane lifestyle contributes to various
health
 issues. There myriad reasons
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 escalating
this
 problem.
This
 essay will dwell into these issues and correspondingly suggest precautions.
To begin
 with, people's attitude towards their
work
 has changed drastically over the years, many people put their
work
first
 before their own well-being.
For instance
, in Japan, statistics show an average person spend over 18 hours of his day at his
work
. The
work
 culture of Japan is known to be the most competitive culture compare to the rest of the world. Japanese men spend their most of
time
 at
work
, sometimes to extent of overworking themselves to death. It has become common in Millenials to prioritize their profession over their mental and physical well-being.
Similarly
,
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ong commute to
work
 can take a toll on people's
health
.
For example
, in the recent study indicates that an average Pakistani spent over 2 hours in commute from its home to
work
.
This
also
 results in huge traffic jams around the city, people spending most of their precious
time
 on the road
instead
 of using that
time
 productively.
This
also
 results in people suffering from
health
 issues like obesity as they are not able to get much movement in their body.
Lastly
, Our eating habits have drastically changed over-
time
, with people giving more
time
 at their workplace, leaves them with less to no
time
 to prepare home-cook food.
For instance
, a person spending the whole day at the office will be left with no energy to cook a meal, so naturally
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he will prefer to take away food which is high sugar and starch.
Although
, our lives have become much busier than has a direct effect on our body. to counter
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 issue, the best way is to strive a healthy lifestyle balance.
For example
, if a person should only
work
 for his agreed-upon shift hours. He should find a good balance between his
work
 and family life. People should put
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ocus on their physical
health
, try to get to at least an hour of walk to their neighbourhood will be sufficient enough to de-stress themselves.
Last
 but not the least, Pre- prepare their meals, plan their week menu and pre-plan their meals and try to incorporate nutritious food in their diet. To summarize,
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 is very important, without our good
health
 we are not capable of doing anything, we should focus on their lifestyle and being healthy
instead
 of earning living. If we are not in good
health
, no money can make up for it.
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