Some people think that one should plan detailed activities for their leisure time, while others disagree with this view. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

All of us are different and prefer to spend their leisure
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in different ways. Some people like planning activities, while others want to do something spontaneously. In
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I will discuss both views and explain my own point. A lot of people think that life is so monotonous
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because
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or holidays. Spontaneous is interesting for them,
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there is a risk to waste a lot of
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or money if something is going wrong.
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, if it is raining, going to the picnic is impossible.
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that people do not frustrate and are always ready to change their plans. As not that kind of person, I prefer to plan detailed activities, and there are many reasons for it.
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or weather forecast helps you to do what you really want without any troubles and distractions.
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, of course, it may safe not only money and
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ood plan may be a guaranty of spending
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dish is available. In
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leisure will be provided with great comfort and pleasure. In conclusion, while some people want to take a rest from any to-do lists and are ready for unexpected events, others, in their turn, know exactly what kind of activity they prefer to have. I agree with detailed planning in order to avoid any failures.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • leisure time
  • detailed activities
  • making the most
  • variety of experiences
  • waste of time
  • over-scheduling
  • spontaneity
  • relaxation
  • increase stress
  • balanced approach
  • impromptu decisions
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