Some people think that one should plan detailed activities for their leisure time, while others disagree with this view. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
All of us are different and prefer to spend their leisure I will discuss both views and explain my own point.
A lot of people think that life is so monotonous there is a risk to waste a lot of
time
in different ways. Some people like planning activities, while others want to do something spontaneously. In this
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live according to to-do lists. Correct your spelling
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why those people do not want to follow any lists during the weekends, vocations
or holidays. Spontaneous is interesting for them, Correct your spelling
vacations
however
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,
time
or money if something is going wrong. For example
, if it is raining, going to the picnic is impossible. Nevertheless
that people do not frustrate and are always ready to change their plans.
As not that kind of person, I prefer to plan detailed activities, and there are many reasons for it. Firstly
, correct planning according to d
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or weather forecast helps you to do what you really want without any troubles and distractions. Correct your spelling
location
Secondly
, of course, it may safe not only money and time
but also
nerves. And finally
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with pleasure. For example
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leisure will be provided with great comfort and pleasure.
In conclusion, while some people want to take a rest from any to-do lists and are ready for unexpected events, others, in their turn, know exactly what kind of activity they prefer to have. I agree with detailed planning in order to avoid any failures.Remove the article
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