Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

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uture of every country. Nowadays study abroad is a common phenomenon everywhere in the world. Students from various countries travel around the world for a study. It has some advantages and drawbacks. Today developing Asian countries like India & China has a

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many times added valuable strength for their future. Students do believe great currier is based on the educational qualification.

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a valuable qualification ensures them a quality life. A great currier help to improve their as well as their family's standard of living. Developing and underdeveloped area of the world always struggle hard for basic necessities. Students who do study in

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students needs to live separate from their family. Separation from family for a specific period of time may break down their financial & mental condition. Sometimes they successfully complete education and return to their home and soon realised due to different pattern their skillset is not matching with

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like they learn how to handle a small group of people but they may face a problem to handle more people on

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more or less happens with developing countries where labours are more and jobs are less.

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Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

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Topic: In many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing.

As the world becomes technologically advanced,computers are replacing people at more and more jobs. what are some job positions that may be lost because of computers?What are some problems that may result from this situation?

In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which do you think is appropriate in today’s world?

Nowadays, many people have to work longer time, and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? What can employers do to make their life easier?