Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

Today we are living in
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every area of human's
life
. More or less, every nation in the
world
follows the
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western
eastern
education system. A human or community without
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literacy
is like jungle game.
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many students prefer
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tudy abroad option due to various reasons. The countries like India and China where large numbers of students
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their study for the different courses. Some of them are correspondent and others are on regular basis. Asian developing-countries has huge numbers of
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orkforce in the
world
. Today many people in the
world
enjoying quality
life
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ood standard of living due to their study abroad decision.
This
decision allowed them to work in different countries
as a result
of
this
they
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emigrated
immigrated
. Their family members
also
enjoying
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etter
life
because of improvement in
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financial
condition.
For instance
, a student from a poor country who successfully completed computer engineering get
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ood job in western countries which changes his entire
life
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.
On the other hand
, various students face a huge gap between there educational course and actual job because different countries
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different pattern and conditions.
For instance
, a student who
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admission for the teaching course and learn how to handle 10 students in the class but after he
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back to home country when and asked to handle 50 students his
life
will be more
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stressful
and
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. It is often seen that similar decision hit hard to
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oin-family concept. Study and settle abroad concept is very popular. When there are few benefits and more drawbacks to of it.
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