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All the people in a company should be treated equally and provided with the same number of vacations in a year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In a company, everybody goes to
work
 at the same moment and leaves the
work
 nearly at the same
time
. Working hours of the employees are the same and effort
that is
 spent nearly the same. If all the employees spend the same
time
 at the office and spent nearly the same
efford
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effort
then
 why would the number of vacations differ? In a fair working
enviroment
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environment
,
n
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umber of vacations should be the same for all employees.
First
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 reason
of
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 my
tought
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thought
thoughts
 is the need for a rest for a human being.
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 think about 2 employees that one of them is 25 years old and the other is 35 years old. Probably, just an assumption, 25
old year old
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 does not have
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hild and her
/
he needs layoff in order to spend with her
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his friends and to relax. And 35 years old, again just an assumption, has a kid and will spend his
/
her
time
 with the child. If these 2 people come to
work
 and leave the
work
 at the same
time
 during the
hole
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 year, what would be the reason for the difference for the holiday numbers. Their needs differ in a manner of child and friends but who decides the importance of those manners? They both need
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est in order to get rid of the tiredness of the whole year
/
month
/
week.
Secondly
, if we continue with those 2 people mentioned above, let's say one of them is a manager and the other is a specialist
of
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 the same department. We cannot say or think that the manager deals with more important works or
specialist
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 deals with more detailed works. Both sides can deal with different important topics and stress level may change depends on
t
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ask. Stress level and working conditions are subjective topics and cannot be logic for different
time
 off numbers of these two workers
Also
, generally, managers have more vacations than specialists since their working years are higher than
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specialists. But they already have had their vacations for previous years, is not it meaningless to give somebody more rest just because working years? In conclusion,
s
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um of vacations should be equal for all the employees since we are all human beings and we all have different needs. Our working years, our position at the
work
 or special conditions should be logic for the total of vacations. If we all start to
work
 and leave
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job at the same generation, our vacation
time
 should be the same.
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