The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take.
Human must live in society and as a part of society the country must elect or appoint someone as the there is lots of why it is necessary and how much it is necessary to why questioning
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,
authority
. And thus
empowering the authority
we also
risk the wellbeing, if it is handled by a wrong person. The prompt suggests that wellbeing enhances when people question
authority
. I agree with the prompt for the below two reasons.
First
, the empowerment of authority
leads to corruption
, and questioning the authority
reduces corruption
and enhances wellbeing. When we consider a man controlling vast power and wealth, there is a high chance that he will think of making some corruption
for their own benefit, coz humans are not above their greed. For Example
- say the countries of t
hird world, where people have almost no right to Change the article
the
question
the government are the most corrupted. Also
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,
corruption
in politics all over the world more than any other professions,
because people have Remove the comma
apply
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ery low rate of questioning the Add an article
a
authority
in this
field. So the above two examples give us clear picturesVerify preposition usage
of
question
the authority
to increase the development and reduce corruption
.
Second
, by questioning the authority
it also
increases the responsibility of them and enhances awareness among the authority
as well as to people. If people question
someone about their work
and responsibility, it is obvious that that person will do the work
more carefully and accurately and if no question
is asked for sure they will just ignore the responsibility or maybe get it done but not so accurately if they need to answer someone about their work
. For Example
- In a class where students and parents are more concern about the quality
of the education they or their children are getting, this
institute will have definitely a better result than other non-concern institutes. Because when the students or parents will raise question
regularly about the quality
of education, the teachers will be more careful and responsible in their work
to get rid of from further
question
and thus
ensure better education. It is clear from the above exampleVerify preposition usage
of
authority
increases the performance and quality
of work
.
In conclusion, Although
Confidentiality is necessary to make sure some quality
in some field, there is no such
secrete way that then
makes a better quality
of work
than answering about the work
quality
to people or consumer. To make sure this
people must Change the determiner
these
question
the authority
that will surely make the performance better than not questioning.Submitted by ranakundu4 on
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