The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take.

Human must live in society and as a part of society

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the country must elect or appoint someone as the

authority

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. And

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empowering the

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we

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risk the wellbeing, if it is handled by a wrong person. The prompt suggests that wellbeing enhances when people

question

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authority

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. I agree with the prompt for the below two reasons.

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, the empowerment of

authority

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leads to

corruption

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, and questioning the

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reduces

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and enhances wellbeing. When we consider a man controlling vast power and wealth, there is a high chance that he will think of making some

corruption

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for their own benefit, coz humans are not above their greed.

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- say the countries of

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hird world, where people have almost no right to

question

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the government are the most corrupted.

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there is lots of

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in politics all over the world more than any other professions

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because people have

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ery low rate of questioning the

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in

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field. So the above two examples give us clear pictures

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why it is necessary and how much it is necessary to

question

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the

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to increase the development and reduce

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.

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, by questioning the

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it

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increases the responsibility of them and enhances awareness among the

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as well as to people. If people

question

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someone about their

work

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and responsibility, it is obvious that that person will do the

work

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more carefully and accurately and if no

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is asked for sure they will just ignore the responsibility or maybe get it done but not so accurately if they need to answer someone about their

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.

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- In a class where students and parents are more concern about the

quality

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of the education they or their children are getting,

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institute will have definitely a better result than other non-concern institutes. Because when the students or parents will raise

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regularly about the

quality

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of education, the teachers will be more careful and responsible in their

work

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to get rid of from

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question

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and

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ensure better education. It is clear from the above example

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why questioning

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increases the performance and

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of

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. In conclusion,

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Confidentiality is necessary to make sure some

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in some field, there is no

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secrete way that

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makes a better

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of

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than answering about the

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quality

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to people or consumer. To make sure

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people must

question

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the

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that will surely make the performance better than not questioning.