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These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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The way of life of humankind has been evolving
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 and nowadays, more women are working outside the home while men are now becoming the housekeeper. There are certainly reasons why
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 phenomena is happening and will be discussed in
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 essay. I support the idea that husbands should be the breadwinner of the family and not the other way around. To commence with, a lot of men become stay at home fathers for one of some other possible reasons and that might be because of the change in the mindset of society that women must be equal with men thereby empowering the lesser sex to fight with men for jobs in society.
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, with women adding to the competition, more men are now losing job
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. One example is the husband of a friend of mine who was
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, another reason might is that men simply
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 accepted that they are no longer the more dominant sex and that they have embraced being the househusband. As it has been said, our world has been changing and still
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 to change. In today's world, there are more and more men who are cooks while the kitchen was reserved for females in the olden days. In conclusion, the reasons that were stated regarding more men being confined in the house to tend to their children
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 as the change in the way society thinks about both sexes that they should be equal
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 in terms of jobs as well as the simple fact that men just accepted their new role. In my opinion,
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an was made to rule over the woman but
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 to love and care for her. He was made to be the protector and the provider and that should remain in
this
 changing times.
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