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Is it wise for an industry to replace its experienced but old workers with new and young individuals who have less experience? Give your views in not less than 250 words. Give reasons for your answer and give any relevant example or experience you have to support your answer.

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The harsh reality of today world is that no job whether
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we will discuss the viewpoint the why it is not a sound decision to change the older high experienced with the new
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ask easily or rapidly in the
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ood year of his life for a particular company and at
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, they just replace him with the younger individual, its even ethically wrong. If a company cannot afford them
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 they should slowly and gradually decrease their duties, so that they will prepare themselves for their retirement or for other work whatever they like, not suddenly out of blue replace them. In conclusion, I would like to say that technically and ethically its not a good decision to leave their elder experience workforce with
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