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TEACHERS USED TO CONVEY INFORMATION, BUT NOW WITH WIDE RESOURCES OF INFORMATION, THERE IS NO ROLE FOR TEACHERS TO PLAY IN MODERN EDUCATION. AGREE OR DISAGREE?

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Due to the innovation of technology, many people are of the opinion that teachers do not play a crucial role in education any more in
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, as far as I am concerned, teachers are still as important as they used to be. In
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nternet and computer has brought distinctive benefits to distance learners in remote areas.
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, thanks to innovative technology, students have a precious opportunity to expand their knowledge of different aspects of life with a single click of a mouse. Especially,
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 allows teachers to create vivid lessons to attract students and improve learning efficiency.
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, the role of teachers cannot be absent in
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earning environment. The
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 reason is that learning is a mutual interaction between students and teachers. Teachers are trained in a professional way with a large amount of
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 knowledge.
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, they have the ability to combine various teaching methodology to make lively lessons to help students absorb them effectively and efficiently. Another thing worth mentioning is that teachers not only teach academic subjects but
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, teachers have to replace parents’ responsibility for helping students distinguish what is right or wrong and give them valuable advice in order to avoid getting involved in a depraved lifestyle. In conclusion, we cannot deny the fact that technological development has improved our lives in some aspect.
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, teachers will never lose their importance when it comes to education.
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