A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree on this?

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Equal opportunities should be provided to both the genders while applying for the university. To some extent I disagree to the point that women's should be given equal rights,
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, the main criteria for the admission should be the merit list. And in
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essay,I would be elaborating more on
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topic. Foremost, students need to gain their admissions through their merit list and on the basis of their skills. Specialization of some subjects are prominent with the sexes,
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, there are more female students who opt for nursing, fashion and air hostess etc.
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, there are subjects related to the interest of the people gender rather than people.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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