Nowadays people have many consumer goods in their homes such as refrigerator, washing machines. Is it a positive or negative development?

In
this
modern era, it is an undeniable truth that technology has made human life easier than in past. People add technology in their life for their routine work. I believe it is a positive change for people.
However
, it has some drawbacks
also
but it can neglect in front of their advantages.
To begin
with, using technology for daily routine
home
chores is the best way to save a lot of
time
. People can do multiple works at the same
time
by usage of the machine.
For example
, washing the clothes manually is a long process and required a lot of energy and there is wastage of water and detergent
also
.
However
, washing clothes in a washing machine is much easier, less consuming water and detergent and
also
save more
time
.
In addition
, most of working individual are cook food in excess quantity and preserved it in refrigerators and they
use
it according to their needs.
Secondly
, people
use
consumer goods for their small businesses which they run from their
home
. In fact, people are using a machine for their
home
chores and
also
business purpose as well.
For instance
, According to the survey, which is conduct by super general
home
appliances in Pakistan. People doing tailoring and dry cleaning businesses by using their personal machines.
In contrast
, the utilities are consumed more but it covered from the business profits To summarize, people
use
consumer good for their comfort because it saves
time
, money and energy
also
. Even though some are making money by
use
Change the verb form
using
show examples
their appliance .
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