Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity , powering industry and fueling transportation .However one day we will reach a point where all the world’s fossil fuels will be lost. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?
Non-renewable sources of
energy
are the power supply for modes of travel and other fields. But they are on the verge of overuse leading to exhaustion.
In my opinion, the use of public transport is the best way of preventing material extinction. Use of government travel will reduce the
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cases, carpooling apps and increase in bus routes will ease the traffic and aid the cause.The service industries can reduce the use of coal and replace heavy setup usage by electronic machinery such
as replacing coal operated oil drills with solar power reliant ones. In addition
to these , there have been many discoveries in light run cars and locomotives, more research into that can completely reinstate the vision of these fields.
These powerhouses can be replaced by renewable sources of energy
.Use of untapped potential
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, in turn,
energy
enough to lighten an entire village and thus
reduce pressure on other modes. These are unused wells of vitality that maybe
harder to harness when compared to the existing ones but can be profitable later.
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Thus
, in conclusion, petroleum and its by-products used on a daily basis can be saved and fast replacement of the these by geothermal , wave powers will prove to be fruitful .Submitted by dereksidh on
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