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Stress-related illness are becoming increasing common. what do you think are cause of this?What solutions can you suggest?

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People are increasing sickness because of
stress
.
This
 essay will discuss the causes of
stress related
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 sickness including working long hours and
job
 pressure and will
also
 discuss
about
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the solutions to
this
 problem including
work
-life balance and
diet
. People are working for long hours than before.
In addition
, they have more
job
 pressure.People
work
 for
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ong hour because of high competition in
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ob world.
For example
, In
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T department, R&D department is very high competitive so people
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 to
work
 for
l
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ong hour to prove themselves.To get grow people has to
work
 more and
work
 for
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onger hour.
This
 results in mental and physical suffering because they have to
work
 overtime and have to
work
 more. In order to reduce the
stress related
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 illness,people should
work
 for
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imited period of time and they should focus on their
diet
 and workout along with family.People need to set up their priorities in their life including family,
work
, health and
then
 should
work
accordingly
.
For instance
, for some people family, health and
work
 all are of same priorities so they will give time to their families , their
diet
 and
work
 out along with
work
 which would help in reducing mental and physical sickness. In conclusion, in today's life
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people are more prone to
stress
.
This
 essay has discussed how working for long hours and
job
 pressure causes
the
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stress
.And
this
 essay has discussed how managing
work life-balance
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 and
diet
 leads to get relief to the
stress
.
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