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You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box. Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter - give details of the camera and where you bought it - explain what has happened - say what you want him/her to do about it

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Dear Sir, Hope
this
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 letter finds you in radiant health and
best
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the best
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 of spirits. My name is Rushi Patel. I'
m
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 writing to let you know about the missing part of the DSLR camera. Which I bought from
duty free
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duty-free
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 shop in
the
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apply
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london
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London
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 on my way
of
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to
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toronto
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Toronto
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. Let me explain my situation, when I reached
at
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my hotel at that time I noticed that there was no charger and cover in the box. Now, I'
m
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 not able to come back to return the product.
Price
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The price
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 of
this
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 camera is $800 and I paid with my
cradit
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credit
 card. Would you kindly, solve
this
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 problem by sending me the missing part here. I'
m
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 staying in 7 wonder hotel in
downtown
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the downtown
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 area of
toronto
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Toronto
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. I'
m
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also
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atteching
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attaching
 the copy of my
receip
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receipt
, so you can easily figure out everything. My number is 9059232174. In case if you wanna contact me directly. Thank you for your consideration.
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Yours
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Your
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 faithfully, RUSHI
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • local representative
  • important items missing
  • purchase details
  • model and brand
  • missing accessories
  • inconvenience
  • use to its full extent
  • urgent request
  • partial refund
  • alternative solution
  • exchange unit
  • correct the issue
  • look forward to your prompt response
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