Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. What are these problems and how could they be reduced?

Today violence levels
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very high in the movies which
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serious problems. Nobody can ignore
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society. Now a time has come to think seriously about it. Movies are
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life
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. There are opinions like society culture reflects in the movie or movie culture reflect in
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society.
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violence
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olience level is increasing in our life due to huge
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entertainment but it
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their mind.
On the other hand
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influenced by these scenes.
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which has
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arge number of young population as well as highest movies producer impact will be unimaginable. Movies showing
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ad impact on an audience. They slowly stop believing
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ustice system. It is often seen that
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people
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their patience very easily nowadays that change their life
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. Showing characters like
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police officers who
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ood relationship with criminals that
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egative impact on them and their decision making when they are in trouble. A very young man try to copy cinema
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consequences
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ame problem is good valued censor board members and
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movies. A tax-free is can be a kind of an incentive which works great in
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childen
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movie
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bad box-office
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work as
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xample or lesson for them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • desensitization
  • empathy
  • aggressive behaviors
  • imitation
  • antisocial behavior
  • normalization
  • climate of fear
  • perceptions
  • mental health
  • aggression
  • emotional regulation
  • trauma-related symptoms
  • age ratings
  • critical viewing skills
  • nonviolent entertainment
  • film industry
  • regulate
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