Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In
this
globalization, many kinds of arts are involved in certain events to blending people that come from different cultures and ages. In
this
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terms, some people say that
music
is a good way for gathering people from different backgrounds together. In my point of view, I disagree with that statement.
Therefore
, in
this
essay, I will explain the reasons why I do not support that idea.
To begin
, another form of arts likes dancing is more interesting for most people. It is because dancing can invite the audients unconsciously to do so, even though they do not understand the meaning of it. Maybe it is the magic of dancing.
Furthermore
, through dancing, people can follow the dancer's movement, which makes them more attractive than
music
.
Moreover
, random people can join with other strangers to perform the movement.
For example
, in Indonesia, there is an annual event in Jakarta that usually invites some traditional dancers across the country to attend
this
event, when the dancers begin to perform the Tari Piring in front of people, we can see that few people start to dance and
this
occurrence will be followed by the others. After that, they may have a chit-chat.
Consequently
,
this
can be used to break the ice among strangers and can be a path to make them closer, forgetting about their backgrounds. Another reason is that
music
can only be enjoyed by some people that really understand it. It is simply because every person has different taste of
music
. Thence, some of them that do not like it might not enjoy.
For example
, there is a
music
festival in Jakarta called DPP,
however
,
this
genre is liked by young generations, so, there will be no adults there.
Thus
, the idea of using
music
to gathering a different kind of people completely fails. In a nutshell, another form of art, which is dancing, is more promising to reach
this
goal than the art of acoustic may do, and
also
, every person has their own taste of
music
, which limits
this
belief.
Hence
, in the end, I would reiterate my belief that I disagree with
this
idea because in general,
music
can not be used to bringing people from many cultures and ages together.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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