As well as making money, businesses should have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Concerning the issue of

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of enterprises on society, people hold different views. An army of people reckons that

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earning money, commercial organizations should

also

pays

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attention to everything around them. From my perspective, I strongly agree with

this

statement for many convincing reasons. On the one hand, it is undeniable that the appearance of many different companies each year has helped a lot in

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the national budget. Namely, with the domination of large groups like Apple or

Microsolf

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Microsoft

, they often employ thousands of

staffs

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around the world

in

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every single year with plenty of good remunerations. These are

trully

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truly

helpful for reducing

jobless

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the jobless

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proportion,

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increasing profit, it

also

proved that enterprises usually take

cares

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and

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of and

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have responsibilities with

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. Another good example is there are more and more private

businesses

who

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are

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on medical service, their debut not only help doctors

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get more modern

equipments

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to cure the patient but

also

reduce jostle in the hospital.

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, it can be

cleary

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clearly

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seen that the came out of these

businesses

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plays an important part in our life.

On the other hand

, enterprises have to make specific environmental protection and

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a fresh air workplace for their employees. If they want to have a long time commercial campaigns and create

a

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good images for their groups, the

leader

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have to

thinking

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about solutions for the future as

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materials which are environmentally friendly.

Likewise

,

businesses

should

creates

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charity programs to help

for

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poor people,

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and so on by taking a small portion of their annual profits. In summary, for the reasons mentioned above, it can be affirmed that

businesses

needs

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to

responsible

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with communication if they can and afford it.