Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

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Nowadays, there

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a plethora of problems that have been arising worldwide

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as, population, environment and

education related

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issues. Counties around the globe will be tolerating a number of challenges like rising numbers in human, nature problems and

education

. Here I will discuss some problems

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facing in

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decade

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, Environmental issues can be growing day by day because of the use of a number of personal vehicles.

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, people are now aware from the advantages of

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the environment and in the result, in

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may have

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of declining in carbon dioxide because of the trees are cut by a human.

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, if we cut greenery

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our nature would be probably disappearing in the

decade

. Moving

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, Talking about

education

, so in many countries

education

fees are too much that we can’t expect and due to

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poor students are not able to teach a satisfactory

education

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they may have to drop the study and doing some unnecessary work. Coming From

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opulation, in

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population would be the greatest problem because the competition will

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igher and competitive world means

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oughest world. Now, I will discuss

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how these problems are overcome. We have to use public transport rather than using a personal vehicle. To doing

this

, pollution will be in control and

also

the environment is clear. For

education

, the Government should take care of poor people and they may help to reach a goal.

Also

, the government can organize a camp to aware of environmental issue. In the Conclusion, from all the aforementioned points, I hold my view that to take some major steps by the government and

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from the human side, it may help to control these problems.

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Sustainability
Ecosystem
Renewable resources
Urbanization
Demographics
Healthcare system
Pension crisis
Curriculum development
Digital literacy
E-learning platforms
Lifelong learning
Public policy
Biodiversity conservation
Green technology
Population density
Generational equity
Economic disparity

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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Fully explain your ideas

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Some people think that cities should be designed to be beautiful rather than functional. Do you agree?

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