Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

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a plethora of problems that have been arising worldwide
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issues. Counties around the globe will be tolerating a number of challenges like rising numbers in human, nature problems and
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. Here I will discuss some problems
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, Environmental issues can be growing day by day because of the use of a number of personal vehicles.
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, people are now aware from the advantages of
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the environment and in the result, in
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of declining in carbon dioxide because of the trees are cut by a human.
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, if we cut greenery
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our nature would be probably disappearing in the
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, so in many countries
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fees are too much that we can’t expect and due to
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poor students are not able to teach a satisfactory
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they may have to drop the study and doing some unnecessary work. Coming From
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population would be the greatest problem because the competition will
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igher and competitive world means
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oughest world. Now, I will discuss
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how these problems are overcome. We have to use public transport rather than using a personal vehicle. To doing
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, pollution will be in control and
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the environment is clear. For
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, the Government should take care of poor people and they may help to reach a goal.
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, the government can organize a camp to aware of environmental issue. In the Conclusion, from all the aforementioned points, I hold my view that to take some major steps by the government and
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from the human side, it may help to control these problems.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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