One of your friends invited you for a meal with his/her family in their home. You enjoyed the meal and had been happy to be introduced to his/her family. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, * thank your friend and say that you enjoyed the meal * say what else you liked about this visit * ask your friend to meet you someday at a restaurant

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Dear Monica, Hope you and your family are well. I am grateful and thankful for inviting me to ur place for dinner, which I enjoyed the most.

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, the food was absolutely delicious and the pizza your mom served was the best

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home made

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pizza I

even

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had in my entire life. Since I recently moved to Malaysia, I did not have

much

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connections;

however

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I would say that

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way your family treated me, I immediately started feeling

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home

Also

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to your mom’s fantastic culinary skills, I liked your

home

location so much. I would say it is perfect, in the heart of

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with flexible options to reach using public transports.

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, your

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is quite spacious and

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garden in your backyard is breathtaking. But, anyway, you have been benevolent enough to invite and serve me a great meal, I would like to ask you to meet up at my favourite restaurant for dinner

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coming weekend. Hope you would find time to come. Warm wishes, Chandler

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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