You are leaving a job and coming back to your hometown. Write a letter to your friend and say : 1. What is the reason for your leaving 2. What do you plan to do 3. Where an when will you meet your friend to discuss it?

Dear Abhi, Hope you are doing well. You will be happy to know that I'm recently
promoted
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Sales Manager with a salary hike of 15% at my current organization.
However
, I have decided to discontinue my tenure with them as I'm planning to start my own cafe. Do you remember I always use to tell you about
this
goal of mine? I feel now is the time to follow my dreams.
Therefore
, I have selected 2-3 options of places to rent at the city centre and I am
also
in talks with few chefs for shortlisting the food menu. I'm planning to start with a medium-sized place, having a sitting capacity of 15-20 inside the shop and 8-10 outside. Since you are a renowned interior decorator, I'd want you to suggest
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the look and theme of the cafe.
Moreover
, I have a few ideas in mind but I would prefer expert advice. So, let's catch up sometime
this
week at my place over dinner to discuss more
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it. Can't tell you how excited I am! Love, Sweta
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