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wealth does not necessarily guaranty happiness. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

#wealth #guaranty #happiness
The bar chart compares
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population
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opoulation of eight regions and their share of
wealth
 in percentages. It is clear that China is the most
populus
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populous
 country with almost one-quarter of the total, whereas, it has only about 2% of
wealth
 share of all the countries.
On the other hand
, North America which has meagre 6% of people
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 the planet, accounts for one-
third
 of the wealthy citizens. Interestingly, India and Europe with almost similar(15%) demography have
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ontrasting number of share in
wealth
 with Europe(30%) and India(approximately 9%). Regarding Asia-Pacific regions, rich countries of the region with only 5
%
humans amass about 25% of the total
wealth
, while the other nations in the region
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have
 little over 2% abundance for about a fifth of world citizens. to conclude, around two-
third
 of rich and affluent people live in North America and Europe where only 20% of mankind resides.
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