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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Our lifestyle-changing very quickly. And the main reason for
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 is technology. We can find millions of books and read all world news without carrying any kind of paper in our hands. In the
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 few years printing the books and the newspapers decrease than before. In general, using only
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 device to read a lot of books is a very amazing idea. A lot of people expect that no
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 will buy a printed
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 and newspaper due to they will be able to read anything they need from the
internet
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. In my opinion, the number of people who buy the
book
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 and the newspaper will decrease. Reading from the tablet of
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Pad is much easier than carrying the books we need everywhere. The weight of the tablets nowadays is approximately less than 0.5 kg. We could reach millions of books independent where or when or even whom searching.
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, all that we need is to have a connection to the
internet
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 and that's it.
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,it's much easier to switch from
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book
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 to another it takes only seconds.
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, online reading is much easier than real books. We don't have to go to any library to look for the
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 we want, it just
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 press and you can buy the
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 online. The
internet
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 is much more useful to know the news of the world. Every part of the
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 there is a huge amount of news uploaded to the
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 with pictures and videos. Nowadays, the newspaper usually gives us news that we already knew about them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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