You have read an article in a newspaper that contains incorrect information about your town/city. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper to inform them about the mistake. In your letter - Describe your knowledge of the city. - Explain what information was incorrect in your opinion. - Suggest how the editor could fix this error.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you about an
article
published in Trip Advisor
last
month
which has some corrections in it. I am regularly read your
article
published every
month
since it is very interesting about the places and its climate.
Last
month
, I read
article
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an article
the article
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about
vedanthangal
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the vedanthangal
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bird sanctuary which is very near to my home town. There are 400,000
birds
migrate
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that migrate
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to
this
place every year. It is very exciting to see those varieties of
birds
.
However
, I see in your
article
that these
birds
can be visited between May and June.
This
is incorrect that the best scenery of these
birds
between
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January and April
month
. We need to give information correctly about the visit and it would affect the tourism industry when foreigners visit
this
place in the wrong
month
.
Also
,
this
would make some false information about the
article
. I am humbly requesting you to correct the information and republish it in your future prints. I am looking forward to a quick resolution of
this
important matter Yours Faithfully Jithendra
Submitted by jithendra0610 on

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