You recently visited a local restaurant with your family and had a very good meal. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper. In your letter

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to share feedback about the local restaurant called Mama Manana.

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eatery is located in the centre of Kyiv just a stone's throw away from the main square

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known as The Independent Square. There is a myriad of Georgian dishes and the greatest is Adjarian khachapuri. It tastes as delicious as an origin khachapuri that I have tried in Georgia

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summer.

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, there

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magnificent Chkmeruli that everyone enjoys and that makes you feel

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to come back to

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restaurant again.

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all

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, the restaurant has amiable waiters and always takes care of the client's comfort. They serve many extra features

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as online

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, a takeout, and delivery to any address through Kyiv.

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, you can use all services twenty-four hours per day. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon and I hope

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information will be of help in your news about local restaurants. Faithfully yours, Helen Myslitskaya

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Oct 16, 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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