It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

This
given chart illustrates the monthly
temperature
and rainfall in Kolkata. Unites are measured in
mm
and degree Celsius. Overall, the Precipitation increases from
month
January to till July ,
then
from July
month
, it starts decreasing sharply.On the other side,
temperature
increases from
month
January to May
then
it's up and down from May to till December. With regards to Precipitation, It starts from around 20
mm
and it continuously increases from Jan to till July
month
. And
then
from July to September, it decreases every
month
around 20
mm
but from
month
September to till December there is heavy downfall like 120
mm
and 120 around respectively. In case of
Temperature
, from
month
January to till May there is a constant rise in
temperature
around 50 degree Celsius.
Then
from May to August,
temperature
constantly decreasing with 20 degree Celsius,
then
from August to till September, there is no
temperature
change.
However
, from September to December,
t
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emperature getting low gradually.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • influence
  • development
  • media
  • pop culture
  • peers
  • family
  • social skills
  • beliefs
  • values
  • emotional support
  • moral guidance
  • aspirations
  • self-image
  • social development
  • value system
  • harmony
  • conflict
  • significant
  • behaviors
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