One of your friends recently had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you couldn't attend. Write a letter to your friend, In your letter. apologise for missing the birthday celebration. explain why you missed it and why you didn't tell your friend. and say what you would like to do to show that you are sorry.

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Hello Sharmi, I hope you are doing well and all the partying didn't wear you out. I

beleive

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believe

it's not too late to apologise for missing out

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birthday party. I really regret not meeting you in person after the celebration but there is a profound reason which kept me on hold. Just the day before, My Father-in-law felt chest pain and we had to rush him to the nearest hospital. Where he was hospitalized for a week, later we were informed about the need for

sugerty

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surgery

to treat his heart blockage. I took a break from work and accompanied him during the surgery and

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, which really kept me swamped. I know apologising wouldn't set things right, but I will try to make it up to you. We will meet

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weekend at your favourite buffet place for dinner, and the bills will be on me. There is a little surprise gift as well, make sure to dress yourself up. Looking forward to

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you! Yours lovingly, Gowthami

Submitted by gowthami.njuly22 on Sat Oct 17 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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171 words

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unavoidable circumstances
last-minute emergencies
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misjudging
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personal letter
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