You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country. Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

Hi Maria, Hope you are doing good! I am very optimistically writing
this
letter to bring you in a notice that recently there a big chef competition started on Facebook in my country and people have been participating from various states and winning the exciting prizes every day. Hope you must be aware! I have been a
lately
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participant in the show. I have reached the
second
level of the round and eagerly waiting for the upcoming and the final round. I would like
you
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to invite you to join the group and watch me on the show to be participating.
However
, you could give your vote to me and arrange as
much
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as votes for me through your friends and help me out to win the show. The
first
winner will get a Honda car and
free
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trip to the USA. The final round will take place at
Bangalore
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location and I will be going there with my mom.
This
story is becoming more popular in India because people are very foody in India,
also
they are very trendy to try some more experimenting with the food.
This
is the reason Indian food is huge in demand around the world. Please come forward
me
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to support. I will update you
further
. Your friend, Neha T
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