Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Nowadays it is a common trend to admit elders in old-age
homes
rather keeping
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than keeping
at
home. Correct pronoun usage
them at
This
essay intends to discuss its pros and cons.
To begin
with, this
view of keeping old people away from the house at a separate place where all of the elder people are being taken care by
some officials casts a positive effect on their health, as older ones feel lonely at residence, Change preposition
of by
due to
generation gap, youngers and adults of the family stays busy in their own daily tasks, thus
, it is hard for family people to take care of elderly; but, at old age homes
, all persons are of the same age and they do not need to elaborate on the topic they do discuss with each other. For instance
, it is easy
for a person who was born in 1945 to talk about their times than to somebody who Correct word choice
easier
is
born after 5 decades. Another huge advantage of using nursing Wrong verb form
was
homes
is that there is always a doctor or a specialist available, so, in case of emergencies it is easy for them to see a doctor instead
of homes
.
On the contrary
, there are some downsides to this
view of putting the older person to old age home. The main negative side is that everyone needs their personal space and in elderly house cares
it is hard for them to get time for themselves because they are always surrounded by someone Correct subject-verb agreement
care
such
as their roommates or doctors or caretakers. Last
but not least, a
grey-haired person starts to lose their grip on their memories and suffers Correct article usage
apply
to
some brain diseases where they do not recognize their own children sometimes , Change preposition
from
as a result
,there are more chances for the family to lose their elder
ones even before death.
In conclusion, it is evident that there are equal positive and negative perspectives of Correct your spelling
older
this
situation , therefore
it is hard to say if its
the best choice or not.Replace the word
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it is
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