Traditional medicines, such as herbal remedies and acupuncture, are very popular in some countries. Those who practice traditional medicines claim that it is better than modern medicine in maintaining and improving health. Do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?

In some parts of the globe, traditional remedies

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and healing touch are being used widely to treat patients. According to some medical practitioners, these medicines are better than

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methods. Before

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furnish my opinion,

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traditional

medicines are being used for ages, even before the birth of conventional medicines. These methods include

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sage of herbs, spiritual therapies, manual techniques and exercise, and do not contain any chemical components which can be harmful

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uman body in the long run.

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to, high costs of modern drugs and treatments have

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lead to

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herapeutic approach for treating common diseases like malaria, and

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infection.

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, in Cameroon, due to unsustainable economy, performing

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traditional

methods have become more popular because of their low cost. On the

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, when it comes to treating severe and detrimental illnesses like cancer, herbal remedies are found to be ineffective

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with

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methods. Modern methods give results faster than traditional

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when treating severe pain and injuries.

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uman body,

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MRI scan, and x-rays which are very helpful in locating and treating problems like kidney stones. Some internal injuries and problems can only be treated by modern surgical tools and techniques. In conclusion,

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disagree with the school of thought that

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traditional

remedies are better than modern techniques. Both medical measures are effective in

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maintaining

and improving health. They can be prescribed according to the severity and type of disease, and

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inancial situation of the patients.