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Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: • thank them for the photos and for the holidays • explain why you didn't write earlier • invite them to come and stay with you

#month #holiday #friends #photos #holidays
Dear Emily, As I have told you before, since
my
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I
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 seven years old my dream was
going
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to go
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 to England so I would like to thank you for all the
companiorship
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companionship
,
hospitality
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the hospitality
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 you have
gave
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 to me in your house and city. When I saw the photos you have sent I could not believe my eyes, because
this
 trip was amazing and it was really important and remarkable for me. I want o
appolize
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apologize
 for my late answer, I have arrived in Brazil
last
 week, but my parents were
in
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on
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 our
Family
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family
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 farm, so I have decided to visit them. I really enjoy
spend
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spending
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 some time with my
Family
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family
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 here, we have great memories of our childhood and families party. The only problem that I can find in
this
 place is that the
sinal
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signal
spinal
 of
internet
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not
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does not
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 work very well. I was talking
tom
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to
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 y husband and we going to travel in December
for
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 a city called Lençóis Maranhenses
that is
 located in
North
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the North
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 of Brazil. Would you like to go with us? That period is the best one to go there, because it
have
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 lakes inside of a little desert and
in
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at
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 the end of the year all the lakes are full of water
givig
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giving
 a seldom experiences as a
beauty
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 view. I will be
waiting
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 your return for I can book a place to stay and start to see another city for we can meet together. Thank you for
everthing
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everything
 and have a good week. Marielle
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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