Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: • thank them for the photos and for the holidays • explain why you didn't write earlier • invite them to come and stay with you

Dear Emily, As I have told you before, since

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seven years old my dream was

going

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to England so I would like to thank you for all the

companiorship

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companionship

hospitality

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the hospitality

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you have

gave

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to me in your house and city. When I saw the photos you have sent I could not believe my eyes, because

this

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trip was amazing and it was really important and remarkable for me. I want o

appolize

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apologize

for my late answer, I have arrived in Brazil

last

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week, but my parents were

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our

Family

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family

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farm, so I have decided to visit them. I really enjoy

spend

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some time with my

Family

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family

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here, we have great memories of our childhood and families party. The only problem that I can find in

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place is that the

sinal

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signal

spinal

internet

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not

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work very well. I was talking

tom

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y husband and we going to travel in December

for

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a city called Lençóis Maranhenses

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located in

North

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of Brazil. Would you like to go with us? That period is the best one to go there, because it

have

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lakes inside of a little desert and

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the end of the year all the lakes are full of water

givig

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giving

a seldom experiences as a

beauty

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view. I will be

waiting

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your return for I can book a place to stay and start to see another city for we can meet together. Thank you for

everthing

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everything

and have a good week. Marielle

mariellecastro3107

Oct 18, 2020

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

247 words

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