Some people feel that entertainer (e.g. film starts, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agee or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?

Nowadays, discussions about how fair is to pay a huge amount of money to celebrities

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of increasing salaries of doctors, nurses, teachers, and another professional who impact directly the society, has been more and more common. From informal meetings to lectures in universities, it has been a relevant topic and owns its supporters and haters. When the society is analyzed from decades ago to now focusing on the richest and most powerful people, clearly a difference between the profiles of these people will be exposed. While during the

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being a specialist doctor, or a family-based business's owner were synonymous of wealth, currently we have athletes, celebrities from Hollywood, local television and even internet as leading players. In Brazil, It is possible to verify all

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mentioned difference. While football stars from decades ago receive a monthly

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support to pay their bills, Neymar, the most famous and important player of the country, earns a million dollars per month

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amount. Differently from decades ago, when being

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in a good university meant become rich. Focusing on

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conomy, it can make sense, once directly or indirectly,

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kind of celebrity impacts a magnificent number of business among his owns sponsor and his team's ones,

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rand which tailors his jerseys, stores who sells it and goes on.

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, all the money is a price for his private life exposure, once its followed 24-7 for

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and fans.

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, the people who can impact

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society are professional as Teachers, Professors, and all medical staff professional

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doctors. Some of them could impact our children and

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ones saving lives as

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main and most trivial duties. Talking about Brasil once again, a huge number of

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teachers receives a minimum wage salary monthly, even being graduated or post-graduated. In conclusion,

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clear that celebrities are important for the economy and impacting people's

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, but the

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not earns so much more than

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. Mainly in a country as Brazil, where a significant part of the population earns a minimum wage monthly,the social gap is even bigger. Neymar was only

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example, but nowadays we could mention a vast array of YouTubers and actors with a situation close to that.