Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Since the industrial revolution, the world has changed with the new way of production, work and consume of the population. The years

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passed, and the fabrics and pastures

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to sustain the population’s increase and maintain the status of world globalization.

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onsequence and the planet earth started to be the central point of scientists and governments discussion.

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most part of people believe in global warming, a part of that do not care about environmental issues and believe

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is a natural process of the planet. Nowadays, there are two studies regarding

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global warming. The

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pollution and deforestation

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been affecting the ozone hole, because of that the climate has changed.

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, studies appoint that global warming is a natural process of the earth. They believe that the earth has heat and cold peaks. For

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onservative population tends to believe

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theory. Young people

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nvironmental issue, but a few

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of them do not concern about it. Some of them do not believe

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, other ones think that global warming will happen in

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istant future and will not affect their lives. Nowadays, in Brazil, the Amazon Forest has suffered

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fires and logging, but it is seldom

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subject being the focus of discussion for

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more important to talk than to discuss the best away to help the forest. Environmental for many governments is the most important subject to be

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oncern because it can affect population all over the planet. In my opinion, Estates will need to focus on the global environment and put on

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economics and weapons matters. Population with the advance

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studies will start to be more conscious about their

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and what it is necessary to do for salve the world.