Despite improvements in vehicle technology, there are still large numbers of road accidents. Explain some of the causes of these accidents and suggest some measures that could be taken to address the problem.

The improvement in the technology of cars is noticeable.

However

, a huge figure of a car crash is still a matter of concern.

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essay will explain what are the reasons behind

this

issue and the ways to mitigate that. There are two main factors that result in automobile accidents. One of the important ones is

cell-phones

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because

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mobile phones draw the attention of drivers from the road to either

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or

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and these inattention

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are not able to react as quickly as they must

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,

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which the collisions will happen. Another debatable factor in increasing the sum of traffic accidents is

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work-schedule

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work schedule

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that in the modern

world

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people have to work for long hours or take an extra night shift to make money, which

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to fatigue. These tired and sleepy workers are not able to drive with full consciousness.

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study in Australia showed that 35% of individuals who had a fatal car crash had been

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night-shift

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workers

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the night before and had sleep deprivation.

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is why changing in work schedule will be discussed later. Despite those aforementioned factors, there are some changes that can happen in order to reduce the total of a vehicle blast.

Firstly

, the government should put high

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those who will talk during the control of cars. If people fear about paying a high charge , they will not break the law.

In addition

, social media can raise public awareness.

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done in IRAN showed that after informing the truck drivers about signs of sleepiness and teaching them to take just a little nap at that time the total of fatal car

clash

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crashes

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decreased dramatically. In conclusion,

while

we have sophisticated vehicles in

this

modern world, the

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number

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of accidents

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high. Some reasons like distraction

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while

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driving by

cell-phone

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cell phone

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or sleepiness from long hours working behind

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can be reduced by putting authorities plus educational

program

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programs

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