. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart compares
population
shares in various regions of the
world
with the distribution of
wealth
in these same regions. It can be seen that
wealth
is heavily concentrated in North America, Europe, and
high income
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Asia-Pacific countries which together account for almost 90% of global
wealth
. Even though North America has only approximately 6% of the
world
's
population
, it boasts nearly 34% of global
wealth
. A similar situation can be seen in Europe, which has 15% of the global
population
but 30% of global
wealth
, and
high income
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Asia-Pacific countries with 5% of the
world
's
population
but 24% of its
wealth
.
In contrast
, the overall share of
wealth
owned by people in Africa, China, India, and other
lower income
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countries in Asia is considerably less than their
population
share, sometimes by a factor of more than ten.
This
is most striking in India, where 16% of the
world
's
population
own only 1% of the
world
's
wealth
and in China, which has the highest percentage of
g
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lobal
population
(24%) but only 3% of the
world
's
wealth
.
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