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Some people think it is good to raise children in a city. Others argue that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Place and culture where we grow up will definitely affect our behaviour and our personality. Children raised in cities always have different behaviour than the children who grew up in the
country
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. Some people argue, that raising children in a
city
 is a good thing, while others think it is always a good choice to raise a kid in the countryside.
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City
 culture provides a lot of opportunities to learn anything. Children growing up in
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ity always have a chance to meet people from different cultures, which can improve their knowledge and understand the world better. Knowing how to interact with people from different backgrounds will help them to face the world better. They can learn different languages because of the multicultural society. In the cities availability of great schools to study, can make them learn anything with high standards. Children can get better medical support when they are living
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the cities, but kids living in cities are more vulnerable to diseases because of the pollution. Expose to different types of pollution, and less interaction with nature are the biggest drawbacks for the growing conditions in the
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 want to raise their child in the countryside because it provides pure and fresh air to grow up. Children raised in the countryside, experience a calm and peaceful life which is a really good thing. Even though
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ountry
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 don't have an opportunity to meet different people, but they learn the value of human bonding. They can study in the local schools, with limited resources. A lot
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people proved that
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c
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ountry
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. Human emotions and farming make raising up in the
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side
 make life beautiful. To conclude, both growing up in
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ity and
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 have their own advantages and disadvantages, but personally, I prefer to raise a child in
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ity because of the opportunities it provides.
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