Some people think that getting degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job, while others believe that it would be better go straight into work and get experience. Discus both sides and give your opinion.

Teenagers, when they finish high school, face the dilemma of whether to get a

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or continue their

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. While some are of the opinion That there are some benefits to getting a

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straight after school, Others claim that it is better to go to college or

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essay will delve into both these views, but my own feeling on

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subject is that obtaining a

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straight forward after completing high school. On the one hand, some support the idea that it is more beneficial to go to work other than obtaining a

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egree. At least 4 years fulltime study is required to obtain a bachelor’s

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as well as coping with the high cost of the tuition. So, for many the idea of getting straight to work and having an income to live independently is appealing. Another justification is that

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the supporter of the former idea claim that they can learn skills and gain experience and skill through work while if they opt to go to

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, after 4 years they should look for a

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entry. So, they prefer working other than educating.

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, the opponent of the view argues that unprecedented advanced technology has impacted on the way works get done and word’s needs so the

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market has become more competitive than ever , without having profession there is less chance to enhance a proper career and matian on it . They argue that advanced technology has affected our life and

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in career, nations no longer need labours as much as before. The ample example if two applicants

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ecent experience and the other on with academic qualification, it is more likely the position be taken up by the

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one. Another argument that

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group puts forward is that academic

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fosters soft skills. There are a lot of practices and projects which put students in the situation that they need to solve the problems, cooperate , manage time and more which are essential skills for performance

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that students who completed

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are more self-esteem and cooperative than others. Since higher

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ob and boost soft skills some believe it guarantees the future career. Taking everything into consideration, I am personally inclined to agree with the latter view. My feeling on the subject is that as a matter of fact, that life is getting changed due to the high technological life c, the world needs

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ore sophisticated and educated individual with the ability of problem-solving, teamwork, and time manager. It is better people by knowing the market requirement and their interest and ability to pick a program to study.