These days many people are interested in buying organic food even though it is often expensive than conventionally produced food. What are some reasons that people prefer organic foods ? Do you think it is important to buy organic food despite the higher price ?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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organically grown foods compared to the regularly produced food items. The underlying reasons for
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situation. There are two main factors leading to the decision of choosing organic foods over conventional products.
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, it is believed that organic foods contain abundant nutrients like Zinc, Magnesium, and Vitamins, which helps in building a strong immune system
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and promotes good health.
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, organic foods
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not contain any harmful artificial fertilisers that are used to stimulate the
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growth.
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, popular baby feeding products like Cerelac, and Pediasure have realised the significance of organic products
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and introduced a special line of organic cereals for
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newly born babies.
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natural foods are expensive than traditional foods, people often prefer them for
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better health. Consuming healthy foods is essential for maintaining
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good health, and considering the current artificial farming techniques invented by humans, it is very difficult to distinguish the quality items among numerous conventional food products.
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, a typical grocery store holds around 4-5 variants of highly consumed vegetables like brinjals, carrots. All these foods are produced using artificial fertilisers and don’t carry any desired nutritional values.
In contrast
, organic vegetables are available in limited variants and contain high nutrients.
However
, they are expensive and barely available in the food markets.
Therefore
, it is reasonable to spend more money on organic foods compared to products produced using harmful chemicals.
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