Over consuming sugar is unhealthy. Some people think that governments should take responsibility to control it. Others think that individuals should take responsibility for sugar intake. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people hold the belief that governments should be responsible

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controlling the

sugar

rate due to the unhealthy impact of

sugar

over-consuming, while others think that doing

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is the

individuals

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responsibility

. While I think

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overnment should take the

responsibility

, I still

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that individuals should take the main part in

sugar

intake

controlling. I understand why some people hold the view that controlling

sugar

intake

is the

responsibility

of governments. Chief among

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is that governments have

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bility

of controlling

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companies whose products containing

sugar

.

For example

, in some developed countries, governments enforce the laws of how much

sugar

can be contained in a product. The

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point is that

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governments have a strong impact on encouraging citizens not to eat much

sugar

.

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means that governments can improve the citizens' awareness of eating less

sugar

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education and propaganda.

Nevertheless

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would argue that each person has their own

responsibility

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controlling their

sugar

intake

. Individuals need to know about their health status. In fact,

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ifferent person can consume

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ifferent quantity of

sugar

. By way of illustration, some people should not eat much

sugar

because of diabetes suffering. In other cases, some people need to eat high

sugar

rate food to boost their energy to do work. If people do not take

responsibility

or awareness of their health status and

sugar

intake

, they can suffer from several health problems. In conclusion, while I agree the governments should take part in controlling the

sugar

rate, I am of the opinion that

sugar

intake

should be controlled by individuals.