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In the last 20 years there have been significant developments in the field of information technology (IT), for example, the World Wide Web and communication by email. However, future developments in IT are likely to have more negative effects than positive. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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In the
last
 two decades, technologies have been changed enormously. Specially, In the Computer and IT fields were made up more convenient and easier lifestyle.
Nevertheless
, Some people believe that the IT developments will influence negatively on our lifestyle in future. On the benefits side, Today's business can easily grow and spread in any foreign country because of the development of Websites and Communication applications.
For Instance
, Employees can watch on their business by installing surveillance cameras which they could access live moments of their store to help of the internet.
Moreover
, Multinational companies would make up deals and quotas by an email with other entrepreneurs. These kinds of convenience facilities were getting by the development of Information technologies. On the other side, People were claimed that they lost the traditional way of communication which was usually by letter writing and face to face conversations. What's more, The BBC news showed a survey about the children or adolescents were easily access porn and criminal news by the help of internet over their computer or tablet. These kinds of negative effects have been created by IT development. To conclude, the Government should have strong cybersecurity services which would have
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However
, I would support the advancement of technologies which gave us fast, reliable and convenient lifestyle.
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